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Monday 1 June 2015

The chick who fell in the rivier

Once there was a hen who had six chick's. Everyone was kind to each other accept the little one. He was very much naughty and the mother hen was upset from the chick . Once they all went to a long walk,They were enjoying the walk the little one was doing naughty thing's.














They were just passing a river suddenly the little chick fell in the river and started yelling help! help!.
Everybody ingnored him and went to the house they ate food and then the mother hen said go to the bed I am coming I have to clean the kicthen  and when she cleaned the kitchen. After ten minutes she went in the bedroom and gazed every bed everyone was in the bed .But one bed was empty the little one was not in the bed she thought he would be in the house she checked him in the cupbored she checked him every where but he was not in the house she ran out and recalled that he was yelling by the rivier he should be in the rivier she ran to the rivier and saw him there she took out him and went to the home and asked him would you do behive like a naughty chick again he said mother I will never ever behive like a naughty chick again. Then they lived happily.


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4 comments:

  1. Good Story, Abiha! Your story has a moral and is interesting too. At first I thought the chick would remain in the river and die, but it's a good thing he survived.
    Keep Writing, and you'll improve.
    Happy Blogging!

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  2. Thank you for commenting and imporing my writing skills.

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  3. Really cute! This story has an interesting twist of suspense - whether the chick will survive in the river or not. I love how it ends! :D

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